Read Write Prompt #105: borrowed words
December 17, 2009
NIGHT FEEDING
Three in the morning:
you're curled on my shoulder
like a hermit crab out of its shell,
warm as a blanket out of the dryer
when I lift you down from your perch
your dark eyes are wide open
as a hind longs for water
my soul longs for sleep
but I pace the round carpet
until I can crawl into bed
praying that I get a whole hour
before you summon me with your cries
that call in equal measure
my milk and my tears
This week's prompt at ReadWritePoem is borrowed words. As it happens, several of these are words which were already rolling around in my head, so I grabbed the word cloud and this is what arose.
The fourth couplet is a play on Psalm 42 verse 1: "as a hind longs for water, so my heart longs for You, God." No disrespect to the psalmist is intended.
To see what other folks wrote in response to this prompt, check out this week's Get Your Poem On post. (And to my fellow RWP'ers: my apologies for not being able to get to your poems and read them and leave comments at this moment! My computer time is awfully limited. Speaking of which, I think I hear Drew now...)